i've already updated thank you

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quem? eu? EUU? quem?

thank you so much for the comment and the critic are always welcome actually i am not english...i am portuguese and my english doesn't have so much words... i wrotte what i felt at the moment and then i changed some words i knew and that i belive were better...and finally i changed some mistakes...but i know that for sure there were some words and expressions that could be better if changed but...my english is not perfect but i love your comment..is great to read something more that "good", "bad"

kiss

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quem? eu? EUU? quem?

Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.



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Random Deviant

Thanks for your comment. It is a ballad really in the form of a duet between sax and vocals. The girl I wrote it for is a singer, her boyfriend back then was / is a sax-player. They could make a lot of music together but they couldn't talk. All that nice drama gave me the inspiration to write her a poem that would lift her spirit. She liked it and sang it ballad-style. Glad it made you sing too.

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I'm jus' here & now

I'll check more of your stuff later. Enjoyed your -Naked- and guess I wanna see more of you soon ... did I mention that I like scotch ...

But seriously I will be back and give some good comments on your pleasurable poetry. And I'm a fan of the X-files too. Nice to meet people that you have things in common with. Yeah, I write pretty good meself ...

Later or sooner

Groovz

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I'm jus' here & now

thanks for the comment

in reply to you:

medium well... original was charcoal on newsprint (wooo) but I done messed around with it in photoshop using brushes for the main and a combination of dry brush/wave/contrast/color-messing-around to get the background. If you know what to look for you can see a bit of the newsprint texture in it... where it warped.. stupid newsprint.

in lieu of a model... check out LOTS of pictures/drawings of anatomy.. if you're gonna do people you need to know that stuff... it will breath realism into your work... you've got potential but you need to get a foundation to work from first. of course, i don't have that foundation either, but i cheat and use models

thanks for comments m8!!




Grz,

MrBlonde

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i'm sure i can spare a kid or two for you

thanks you enourmously for the viewing and such - i can recommend fellow deviants thelonius (and his friend kulick) and sheerie as other folk you might want to check out for poetry - i'm in the process of reading your worksandsuch

btw scotland? that is highly very awesome
i'd kill to be european
but i wouldn't really kill
i'd stab a bell pepper or something

oh well

right, have a good one!